With a basic premise like that, there is hypothetically a lot of wiggle room to make a fun story. You can try and balance drama, horror, and levity, which would likely be the best recipe for the subject matter. The story was confusing. For one, in the beginning of The Carnival Of Horrors (SCP-823) chapter we meet these three soldiers and when the main character mentions the name Dr Bright they start to treat the main character with kindness or sympathy. Because he was tangled up in Bright’s mess. Later on the female soldier in the group reveals that she has a family and a younger brother. Which was revealed later on by Bright that he was her brother. Which makes no sense! Either Bright was joking or something but that made no sense! If they were siblings and the soldier knew the name of Bright before this she wouldn’t be fighting there to begin with because her brother would be a researcher and scientist! (She only worked there to give her family a better life) But Bright would be a lot younger and the soldier said that he was probably around the same age as the main character! And Bright is like a lot older than that when he was working in the foundation, yet they still recognized the name Bright even though Dr Bright as a young teenager, wouldn’t be working at the foundation in that time! Yes, I wanted to ask. You know, ████████ █████ died recently. [audience sighs, sadly] How has it affected you? I really did want to like this but I can't. About the only good thing I can say is that it made me aware of the SCP Foundation. I've enjoyed reading the files and watching some short films.

Broadcast intercepted by Protocol Ophiuchus: On the daytime talk show “████████”, host ████████ ███████ hosts an episode alone. The studio is dark, and apparently contains no audience. The host carries a lit candle for illumination. Two cameras are used, though it is unknown how they are being operated; one is set up to capture ████████ and the seat across from her; one is directly in front of her. the book’s writing is pretty awful. there were no arcs, no personality on the main character, and so much unnecessary details and explanations… but at the same time as much as i hate this book, i really wished it could’ve been better. but after finishing it, im just so sad and disappointed for what this book could’ve been. it could’ve been interesting! it could’ve been a super fun read. it could’ve been one of my most prized possessions in my bookshelf Day 13 (Saturday, 5/4): Foundation agents investigate the case of the Boyars and determine a possible link between their outburst and the book titled Star Signals. The Boyars’ copy is confiscated for examination, as well as a new copy from a local bookstore. Do you feel a void in your life? Everyone does, whether they know it or not. Think about it. You can feel it inside you right now: a heavy emptiness in the middle of your chest. It’s a reflection of the one in your existence, like particles in quantum entanglement. Do you remember how we talked about quantum entanglement? Nod “yes”. Yes, you do. Yes, you feel the emptiness.While the rest of mankind dwells in the light, we must stand in the darkness to fight it, contain it, and shield it from the eyes of the public, so that others may live in a sane and normal world.

Errors - I'm going to chalk this up to poor proofing. I found a number of writing errors that took me out of the story. Peppy: Really? Sorry, I got distracted, I guess. Kids, pay close attention. I’ll teach you how to make candles out of whoever you find lying around! This is good. It’s a blank slot waiting for you to fill it up with your deepest desire until your deepest desire is pushing up into your throat. You will gag on your need. And until you do, it is a resonation space, for you to build your will like organ music in a cathedral. Hear the music now. This is not a metaphor. If your will is strong enough, there will be music now. Remember now that nothing in this book is a metaphor.i felt absolutely nothing when that scene came up. not even a “aw poor guy <:/“ he’s just so bland that i can’t get attached to him at all! and like it’s not that hard to get people attached to things. we get attached to /roombas/, little machine disc things that roll around on the ground and clean up the floor! Dialogue - I don't know if it was the translation or the author's writing but people just do not talk the way they do in the book. It is so awkward and unnatural. Especially Iris. It broke any sense of immersion I had. The [REDACTED] publishing company is determined to be a front for the Fifth Church, and is seized. MTF Theta-11 “Wranglers”, MTF Gamma-4 “Money Lenders”, and MTF Lambda-21 “Cave-Dwellers” are sent to the Texas, Maine, and England printing facilities, respectively. All MTFs are met with armed resistance, and engage with no friendly casualties. Publication of SCP-1425 is ended. The publisher’s headquarters in [REDACTED], California is commandeered by MTF Phi-1 “Hostile Takeover”. SCP-3880 - ILLEST RAIN SOUNDS ∞ Hours No Looping - White Noise, Nature/Healing/Ambient, Meditation/Insomnia/Study ASMR [ORIGINAL]